Colors lookin good~! Some points of my 2 cents worth (plz dun take offense okie? just saying my thots...) :

- U pumped th levels a little too much on th black, so th hair has lost its detail, including th shadows. Note th left eye, and armpit area esp.

- Good job on th skin smoothing n th eyebrow, altho th cheeks is a lil overdone, looks flat, try giving it a light dodge for 'highlight' to make it look rounder.

- Just for crazy challenges sake, u can even try to take out th fringe of hair on her face. Seen ppl do some thing similar, but i think tts pretty darn hard to do.

Well, she still looks like she went for a good makeover..!

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Meh people should be satisfied with how they look in the first place

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I think you did a great job!
As far as the comment above, i disgree with the blacks statement, but agree with the hair fringe. Just isolate it using one of the lasso tools, and rub it out.
Also, if you add a small amount of grain/noise, or you create a new layer and use the sharpen tool and "Sample All Layers", you can roughen it a little and take away some of the airbrush feel.

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